Migsy's review of Falling Skies is up today (http://grogheads.com/?p=6619). Your thoughts below!
Good review. Indeed, it looks just like Enemy Unknown.
I caught a few errors - feel free to implement or completely ignore me on these. :)
In the first paragraph, note that "Massachusetts" is half italicized. Was it supposed to be fully italicized? I'd say it doesn't need italics at all.
Second paragraph: looks like there's a space in "adventures" between the 'e' and the 's' at the end.
First bullet point under second paragraph: "fair" should be "fare." ("How will Falling Skies fare...") Also, this first bullet point should have punctuation as the second bullet point has punctuation (place a question mark at the end of the first bullet point, as the author is asking a question).
First paragraph under "The Mechanics" - why is the Oxford comma not used? ("...food, metal and medical supplies" should be "...food, metal, and medical supplies" - at least with that mechanism in place, unless you guys do the dirty APA/UK style of reporting.) This is throughout, but I understand it is a stylistic thing and not everyone believes in the Oxford Comma (blasphemy!). :)
Under "Getting Tactical," '4 to 6' should technically be 'four to six.' Always spell out numbers under 10 and numbers 10 or higher get the number treatment, unless starting a paragraph (never start a paragraph with a number under 10). That's just the dirty technical writer in me talking.
Second paragraph under "The Sky Is Falling," 'attack' should be plural.
Awesome - I told ya he'd catch 'em all Brant ! ;)
Nice review Migs. I wondered about this game...now I know to pass on it. O0
Quote from: bayonetbrant on November 14, 2014, 06:52:04 AM
Missy's review of Falling Skies is up today (http://grogheads.com/?p=6619). Your thoughts below!
'Missy'?
Sumpin' you ain't tellin' us Migs?
Nice review BTW. O0
Nice review. O0
Thanks guys ~ Migsy ;D