AAR for Second Front

Started by Uberhaus, May 04, 2024, 03:33:42 PM

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Uberhaus

I posted an AAR for Second Front, playing a workshop designer's monthly contest.  It's my first guide, hopefully Second Front players can pick up some tips.

https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=3238701153

JasonPratt

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"More than just atrocious alliteration on my part, I aaapologise!"

It's also assonance!  :Nerd:

Anyway, I attempted to allocate award-points appropriately, but alas: nothing fit so take my points.
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Uberhaus

Quote from: JasonPratt on May 04, 2024, 08:27:13 PM"More than just atrocious alliteration on my part, I aaapologise!"

It's also assonance!  :Nerd:

Anyway, I attempted to allocate award-points appropriately, but alas: nothing fit so take my points.

Wow, thanks! 

As to my inability to distinguish poetic devices, you'll just have to bear with my naivety!  So, to demonstrate that one person has learned something from this whole exercise: As to assonance, I won't be an ass and assume that the use of a, e, i, o and u again and again is alliteration; it is assonance.  I will constantly contrive to commit the continuance of consonants classifies as alliteration.

JasonPratt

Actually, I myself thought the vowels were alliteration, and was complementing you on also getting some assonance with the consonants!

So I was also mixed up.
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Uberhaus

Not having much exposure to art, I'm still not comprehending.  I'm your worst pupil.

So, I'll move onto puns:  Don't take everything I say literally. 

That definitely needs even more help.