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After Action Reports => Digital Gaming AARs => Topic started by: Uberhaus on May 04, 2024, 03:33:42 PM

Title: AAR for Second Front
Post by: Uberhaus on May 04, 2024, 03:33:42 PM
I posted an AAR for Second Front, playing a workshop designer's monthly contest.  It's my first guide, hopefully Second Front players can pick up some tips.

https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=3238701153
Title: Re: AAR for Second Front
Post by: JasonPratt on May 04, 2024, 08:27:13 PM
"More than just atrocious alliteration on my part, I aaapologise!"

It's also assonance!  :Nerd:

Anyway, I attempted to allocate award-points appropriately, but alas: nothing fit so take my points.
Title: Re: AAR for Second Front
Post by: Uberhaus on May 05, 2024, 08:34:30 AM
Quote from: JasonPratt on May 04, 2024, 08:27:13 PM"More than just atrocious alliteration on my part, I aaapologise!"

It's also assonance!  :Nerd:

Anyway, I attempted to allocate award-points appropriately, but alas: nothing fit so take my points.

Wow, thanks! 

As to my inability to distinguish poetic devices, you'll just have to bear with my naivety!  So, to demonstrate that one person has learned something from this whole exercise: As to assonance, I won't be an ass and assume that the use of a, e, i, o and u again and again is alliteration; it is assonance.  I will constantly contrive to commit the continuance of consonants classifies as alliteration.
Title: Re: AAR for Second Front
Post by: JasonPratt on May 05, 2024, 12:22:47 PM
Actually, I myself thought the vowels were alliteration, and was complementing you on also getting some assonance with the consonants!

So I was also mixed up.
Title: Re: AAR for Second Front
Post by: Uberhaus on May 05, 2024, 01:47:16 PM
Not having much exposure to art, I'm still not comprehending.  I'm your worst pupil.

So, I'll move onto puns:  Don't take everything I say literally. 

That definitely needs even more help.