Cafe Press Shirt Quotes

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Barthheart

Quote from: bayonetbrant on September 17, 2012, 07:15:29 AM
had to put it in the right place.  I'm all about order, neatness, and restraint.  Sort of.

Can ya move my response?

bayonetbrant

Quote from: Barthheart on September 17, 2012, 07:21:30 AM
Quote from: bayonetbrant on September 17, 2012, 07:15:29 AMhad to put it in the right place.  I'm all about order, neatness, and restraint.  Sort of.
Can ya move my response?

Moved. But now the thread is all disordered, anti-neat, and unrestrained.  Dammit.
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TheCommandTent

Quote from: bayonetbrant on September 17, 2012, 07:02:10 AM
How's this as a first cut?



Not bad but it looks very sterile.  I agree with Barthheart, something to spice it up would be nice.  Also it might be an optical illusion but it doesn't look like the hex is centered over the word 'keep' unless of course this is intentional.
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bob48

Try putting the word 'and' in a hex instead of having a naked hex at the top?
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mirth

Or make the 'O's hexes and ditch the separate hex symbol entirely.
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bayonetbrant

Old image deleted, so it's going to show up as a missing image now.

How's this one?


I don't want any counters or images in the hex b/c it makes the whole think too genre/battle-specific.  I want it to be generically grog-specific :)
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LongBlade

Quote from: bayonetbrant on September 17, 2012, 02:11:35 PM
Old image deleted, so it's going to show up as a missing image now.

How's this one?


I don't want any counters or images in the hex b/c it makes the whole think too genre/battle-specific.  I want it to be generically grog-specific :)

I'm wondering how it will look if we keep the crown on top for consistency. Almost every shirt I've seen starts with that icon and then deviates. Try that and see how things look.
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